The first poem I wrote that I liked
Posted on Dec 3rd, 2008
by
Kevino
Dream of evergreen days
Mist floats amid trees in salty air
Rock and cobble
lie beside pathways
formed from a million years
of washing waves
Troubles of the world passed
All liquid emotion spent
Dream of evergreen days
in trees
above the
gliding and restless sea
Mist floats amid trees in salty air
Rock and cobble
lie beside pathways
formed from a million years
of washing waves
Troubles of the world passed
All liquid emotion spent
Dream of evergreen days
in trees
above the
gliding and restless sea

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This really takes me back. I wrote something semi-similar in spirit for an english class, but I don’t think I could possibly find it now. This is one of those you go back to and sigh with contentment. Mine was not; it was hurriedly written and timed. I don’t know what she was trying to do with us there, maybe make it more natural? In any case, I am glad you have this.
I have a bunch of quotes I have on a jump drive. Would you mind if I added this to my collection?